Hi everybody!
My name is Fatma, I’m from Antalya, I was born in 20 July
1995, in Antalya. I’m a first
degree student in Faculty of Language Education department at METU.
This is my second year in METU. I was at preparatory school last year and it was a big chance for
me to both to adopt to the campus life and to develop myself academically. I’ve
graduated from Türkler I.M.K.B. Anatolia Teacher Training High School in
Alanya. Our class was the least populated one throughout its history, we’re
only seven! It was both a advantage and disadvantage for us. We had to
participate in each lesson actively
unlike the others classes, but in case of any unwillingness towards to any lesson,
it was very easy to break up it, because it was also easy to constitute a
majority. I stayed at dormitory during my high school time. We made a lot of
increadible memories along these years both good and bad, but I think they all
made me more experienced and conscient person in interpersonal relations. Besides
these, I also want to talk about my hobbies, or rather than hobbies, the things
I enjoy doing; because there is nothing regarded as hobby that I do
continuously . I like swimming or any other activities relateted to sea, but it’s
impossible in Ankara to do it. However, last year, I had a chance to have a
similar experience, I went to Blue Lake with my friends and rode paddle boat. On the other hand, in the past, I was in marching band for
6 years both in primary school and high school. In addition, I was also in folklore group in primary school for 2 years.
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| MY HOMETOWN |
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OUR CLASS IN HIGH SCHOOL
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| OUR GRADUATION CEREMONY |
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| THE MARCHING BAND |
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| WHILE RIDING PADDLE BOAT IN BLUE LAKE |
Hi Fatma
YanıtlaSilI read your first reflection task and I want talk about it. I appreciate you for expressing your ideas in a correlative way. You didn't go off the subject. You used the linking words ;such as , because,but,however ,on the other hand appopriately. Besides you don't have problem with punctuation. However , I found some mistakes in your reflection. If you had used 'in terms of' instead both ( line 3) , it would be more accurate. You did tiny mistake with article use in line six. Its right form should be like an advantage. In line 7 you said 'others classes' so -s letter is uncessary. Also there is one more unnecessary word in line 8. It is towards. In line 8 you did mistake about word order. You should have written the 'it' between break and up.In line 9 there is again unnecessary word.Since during contain the meaning of the time ,use of time is unnecessary. To conclude, I like your reflection task and my liitle advice is you need to be more careful. I hope my suggestion will be useful for you.